{"id":5465,"date":"2023-11-29T01:40:13","date_gmt":"2023-11-29T01:40:13","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/learningcommons.twu.ca\/?p=5465"},"modified":"2024-04-28T12:19:23","modified_gmt":"2024-04-28T20:19:23","slug":"sarah-looby","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/create.twu.ca\/learningcommons\/2023\/11\/29\/sarah-looby\/","title":{"rendered":"Sarah Looby"},"content":{"rendered":"<h1>Sarah&#8217;s Reflection<\/h1>\n<h3>Sarah Looby<\/h3>\n<h3>April 21, 2021<\/h3>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">My first year at the writing centre has taught me<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0how to create a space where students feel free to<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0share<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0their writing struggles<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">. As I grew into my role as a writing tutor, I learned how to breakdown the writing process and make\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">it palpable and understandable for others.\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Afte<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">r,<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0I learned how to clarify the writing process<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0and I\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">realized that many students struggle to share about the things they are specifically struggling with, or they assume that I am just there to fix their writing.\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559731&quot;:720,&quot;335559740&quot;:360}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">These experiences made me self-reflect\u2014as I wondered why I am comfortable pulling my writing a part<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">.\u00a0 I realized that my experiences having my mom edit my writing as a child taught me that sometimes the messier the editing process gets, the stronger the finished product will be.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559731&quot;:720,&quot;335559740&quot;:360}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Yesterday, I worked with a student who lived in China and English was her second language.\u00a0 As we worked together on the word order of her sentences, I realized that <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">the job of editing her work is uniquely difficult for her, as so much of my editing comes from hearing the mistakes.\u00a0 Yet, I hear the mistakes because I was read books in English as a child and continue to read.\u00a0 So, as I pull my own writing a part, I have confidence that I can work it back together<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559731&quot;:720,&quot;335559740&quot;:360}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">In Muriel\u2019s article \u201cTheory of Reality: The Ideal Writing Center(s),\u201d he describes the writing centre or writing lab\u2014as he calls it\u2014as \u201can environment especially conductive to case-study research, to research focusing on individual differences among writers\u201d (6).\u00a0 Within this type of environment, students arrive at \u201ca friendly support place. . . and not a tightly controlled classroom\u201d (6).\u00a0 Chaos, Muriel appears to believe, is a key part of the learning process as the students are free to make mistakes<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">.\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559731&quot;:720,&quot;335559740&quot;:360}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Many of the students that I worked with this semester, were very concerned that their writing and grammar needed to be perfect.\u00a0 Following Muriel\u2019s ideas, the writing centre should be a place where learning can get messy\u2014where sentences are broken down and reworded and the student understands why.\u00a0 Muriel\u2019s ideas felt tangible to me, as I worked with a student over the course of the semester, who only focused on perfecting her writing and not learning from prior mistakes. Her focus made it difficult to challenge her preconceptions around writing\u2014for instead she focused on making the fewest grammar mistakes as possible. As I tutored her, I wish <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">I could have helped her to focus more on improving her sentence structure and given her tools to make her a better writer in the future.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559731&quot;:720,&quot;335559740&quot;:360}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">According to Muriel, \u201cIdeal writing labs don\u2019t threaten or intimidate students by being too quiet, too impersonal\u201d (6), instead they are welcoming and hospitable.\u00a0 Although, the writing centre was over zoom<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">, I tried to create friendly and welcoming space for students to feel open to share their struggles and gain insight through open conversations.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559731&quot;:720,&quot;335559740&quot;:360}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center\"><strong>References<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"none\">Harris, Muriel. \u201cTheory and Reality: The Ideal Writing Center(s).\u201d\u202f<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"none\">The Writing Center Journal<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"none\">, 5\/6, no. 2\/1, 1985, pp. 4\u20139.\u202f <\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"none\">JSTOR<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"none\">, www.jstor.org\/stable\/43441803. 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