Run-on Sentences

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Welcome to the Learning Commons Quick Start Guide on run-on sentences!

Run-on sentences are commonly found in inexperienced academic writing. They seem to make a given paper appear more “technical,” but really all they do is obscure meaning. This Guide will explain:

  • What run-on sentences are
  • How to fix run-on sentences (both fused sentences and comma splices)
 
Course Information

Course Level: Beginner

Time to Complete: 15 mins

Perfect for: Students in WRTG100/101, ENGL103, or anyone who needs a refresher.

Guide Creator: Alice Wu

Run-on Sentences 101

This video is a primer on what makes for a run-on sentence:

  • Two independent clauses are put together without being connected correctly. They are missing either:
    • The proper punctuation between them, or
    • A conjunction connecting them.

In this mini-course, we explore this in more detail:

  1. Spotting Run-ons
  2. Specific types of run-on: fused sentences
  3. Specific types of run-on: comma splices
  4. Correcting run-on sentences

Topic 1: Spotting a Run-on Sentence

Run-on sentences are made up of two independent clauses that have been connected incorrectly. But what makes a clause independent?

An independent clause is a complete thought. It should contain a subject and a verb. In some instances, the verb will also require an object.

  • Subject: Who and what the sentence is referring to. This is usually a noun or a pronoun.
    • Noun: a person, place, thing, or idea.
    • Pronoun: Substitutes for nouns – he, she, it, I, you.
  • Verb: What the subject of the sentence does or is. This can be an action verb or non-action verb.
    • Action verbs: Jump, shout, run, dance.
    • Non-action verbs: is, are, was, were, am.
  • Object: A person or thing affected by the action of the verb.

This chart demonstrates the parts of an independent clause:

Subject

Verb

Object

I

bought

textbooks.

What a run-on sentence is:

Now that we know what independent clauses are, we are ready to address run-ons themselves. As we mentioned on the previous page, run-on sentences result from two or more independent clauses being connected together without the proper punctuation between them.

There are two main types of run-on sentences: Fused sentences and comma splices.

 Fused sentences occur when there are two or more independent clauses joined together without any punctuation.

  • Example: Jane Austen published novels anonymously Jane Austen wrote six novels in her lifetime. 

There are two complete sentences in the example above!

  • Sentence #1: Jane Austen published novels anonymously.
  • Sentence #2: Jane Austen wrote six novels in her lifetime.

A comma splice occurs when two independent clauses are attached with only a comma.

  • Example: Jane Austen published novels anonymously, she wrote six novels in her lifetime.

Again, there are two sentences in this example.

  • Sentence #1: Jane Austen published novels anonymously.
  • Sentence #2: She wrote six novels in her lifetime.
Your Turn: Test Your Understanding

That was a lot of information! Think you have a grasp of it? Test yourself!

Topic 2: Correcting Run-ons

It is pretty clear (we hope) that there is something wrong when you spot a run-on sentence. However, it is important to know how to fix the run-ons when you find them.

Use a Period

One way to fix a run-on sentence is to use a period to separate the independent clauses into separate sentences.

Example:

Run-on sentence: Jane Austen published novels anonymously Jane Austen died on July 18, 1817.
Revised sentence: Jane Austen published novels anonymously. Jane Austen died on July 18, 1817.

Use a Semicolon

Using a semicolon to separate the independent clauses changes a run-on sentence into a grammatically correct sentence.

Example:

  • Run-on sentence: Jane Austen published novels anonymously Jane Austen wrote six novels in her lifetime.
  • Revised sentence: Jane Austen published novels anonymously; she wrote six novels in her lifetime.

Use a comma and a Coordinating Conjunction

Coordinating conjunctions (FANBOYS): For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, and So. 

Example: 

  • Run-on sentence: Jane Austen published novels anonymously Jane Austen wrote six novels in her lifetime
  • Revised sentence: Jane Austen published novels anonymously, and she wrote six novels in her lifetime.
Your Turn: Test Your Understanding!

 

Now, return to the Learning Commons Resource Moodle and do the exit quiz to confirm your new knowledge!