Tianyu, these drawings show care, good observations and an increased level of ability. The second head study is a beautiful and proficient planar analysis drawing, that is beginning to show volume very successfully. Good use of sighting lines to sight placement of features in the face, and to indicate the angles of shapes. Now add to this exaggerated atmospheric perspective and the figures will really begin to have spatial depth. Unfortunately, these drawings do not align well with the drawing instructions. Did you read the instructions for each drawing? Please read the instructions more carefully so you understand what is being asked. For example, this drawing challenge was 5 foreshortened figures, and planar analysis was not asked for. The first head drawing drawing is a good start but the negative space needs to be far more active in shaping the form. The toned negative space study too is a good start but needs to be subdivided into smaller negative space chunks in order to be of useful to you in shaping form more accurately.
Tianyu, these drawings show care, good observations and an increased level of ability. The second head study is a beautiful and proficient planar analysis drawing, that is beginning to show volume very successfully. Good use of sighting lines to sight placement of features in the face, and to indicate the angles of shapes. Now add to this exaggerated atmospheric perspective and the figures will really begin to have spatial depth. Unfortunately, these drawings do not align well with the drawing instructions. Did you read the instructions for each drawing? Please read the instructions more carefully so you understand what is being asked. For example, this drawing challenge was 5 foreshortened figures, and planar analysis was not asked for. The first head drawing drawing is a good start but the negative space needs to be far more active in shaping the form. The toned negative space study too is a good start but needs to be subdivided into smaller negative space chunks in order to be of useful to you in shaping form more accurately.