Tianyu, on the whole, the musculature of the neck and shoulder is reasonably accurate but the surface is thin, and the whole seems unfinished. This drawing would benefit from much more attention to surface. Overlapping red, blue and yellow in places would help unify your drawing and create more volume. Using graphite along with your pencil crayons will do the same. To avoid this being a dry anatomy study, try redoubling your efforts to create very beautiful surfaces.
Your drawing demonstrates:
a good start on understanding of the anatomical structural foundations of the human body
the integration of the bones and muscles within the contour edges could use more attention.
reasonably accurate anatomical skeletal forms and musculature
surfaces are not yet utilizing transparency and opacity to sort out the interaction between the bones and muscles. Creating transparent surfaces will allow the skeletal form to interact with the musculature. Did you use a blender pencil?
surfaces do not yet show the pull of muscles, although they are beginning to attach into the bone structure. The blender pencil will also aid in creating transparent surfaces that mimic the pull of muscles.
Tianyu, on the whole, the musculature of the neck and shoulder is reasonably accurate but the surface is thin, and the whole seems unfinished. This drawing would benefit from much more attention to surface. Overlapping red, blue and yellow in places would help unify your drawing and create more volume. Using graphite along with your pencil crayons will do the same. To avoid this being a dry anatomy study, try redoubling your efforts to create very beautiful surfaces.
Your drawing demonstrates:
a good start on understanding of the anatomical structural foundations of the human body
the integration of the bones and muscles within the contour edges could use more attention.
reasonably accurate anatomical skeletal forms and musculature
surfaces are not yet utilizing transparency and opacity to sort out the interaction between the bones and muscles. Creating transparent surfaces will allow the skeletal form to interact with the musculature. Did you use a blender pencil?
surfaces do not yet show the pull of muscles, although they are beginning to attach into the bone structure. The blender pencil will also aid in creating transparent surfaces that mimic the pull of muscles.