Riley, your gestures are good and show energy and exploration. Your contours are too fast and need to slow down and wait for hand eye connection. They need to be much more precise and sensitive, using light and dark passages throughout. Sensitively search out the precise edges and carefully change directions following every edge, whether interior detail or exterior edge, at the same slow rate. Your negative space would benefit from a format edge around it so that you see the negative spaces more accurately.
ericag
Riley, your gestures are good and show energy and exploration. Your contours are too fast and need to slow down and wait for hand eye connection. They need to be much more precise and sensitive, using light and dark passages throughout. Sensitively search out the precise edges and carefully change directions following every edge, whether interior detail or exterior edge, at the same slow rate. Your negative space would benefit from a format edge around it so that you see the negative spaces more accurately.
ericag
Redo blind contour and negative space drawings to raise your grade.